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    dots Submission Name: I'm Weakdots
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    Author: Imadjinn
    ASL Info:    17/M/Neverwhere
    Elite Ratio:    4.27 - 340/348/146
    Words: 50
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
    Total Views: 595
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 351



    Description:
       so fuck you.


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    dotsI'm Weakdots
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    I'm weak,
    so what if it's true.
    I just did, what I thought was right
    to do.

    so what if I'm weak.
    I'm the antichrist.
    I'm a disaster
    on wheels.

    I'm weak.
    So what if it's true.
    How can you say you hate this,
    When you made it.




    Submitted on 2006-08-27 23:14:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      The motor is running but the road is wrong.
    | Posted on 2006-08-27 00:00:00 | by realpoet | [ Reply to This ]


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