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    dots Submission Name: blood lovelydots

    Author: musiclee
    ASL Info:    16
    Elite Ratio:    1.84 - 2/5/7
    Words: 71
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 590
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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       just a little something i put together for fun

    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsblood lovelydots

    come on my babe we'll kill tonight
    and show these demons how to rake out eyes
    a blackened stare as we glide to the moon
    bite necks of innocence drink 'till we're fools
    crimson lines the coffins velvet of the mass
    horrid displays of life in this troubled past
    a cold hearted kiss is what I present to you
    i'll love you to death its too late it came true

    Submitted on 2006-08-28 03:07:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I'm gonna guess that this is to represent a vampire. I think that if in fact it is a representation of a vampire, it is very well written. Failry original idea and good description. At first I stopped my self after the 2nd line because I didn't really catch a grip of what it meant, but after reading the rest of the poem I undersand it. I think you did an excellent job on this and I think you deserve a round of applause. *clap* *clap* *clap*
    Keep writing.
    | Posted on 2006-08-29 00:00:00 | by Caotic_Disaster | [ Reply to This ]

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