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    dots Submission Name: Panaceadots
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    Author: Chihuahuii
    ASL Info:    16/f/Cali
    Elite Ratio:    3.65 - 75/90/36
    Words: 307
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 162
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1965



    Description:
       People fall in love with things they can see, art forms they can see, etc. So where do words fit in?


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    dotsPanaceadots
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    I have a panacea
    For the snake-skinned fork-tongued
    High-nosed corporate administrative
    Bastards of the world.

    I have a panacea
    To heal the broken souls of the con kings,
    Hustlers, swindlers, smugglers,
    Liars, cheaters, crude wife beaters,
    Candy takers, cherry poppers
    And auto bass bumpers that populate
    And annotate our altercating nation.

    They invent a new reality.
    Rose petals wilt across the door to a lesser tragedy.
    My satiation crumbles,
    Multiply the crumbs to build a nation,
    Crucify my love to keep my day job ensured,
    I testify the makings
    Of a new revelation.

    Crime scene creeps to keep the light side true.
    They try to beat the system and I do it too,
    So my panacea is specialized for me and my crew, who,
    Under the light of the moon set fire to
    Our inhibitions, gave me the bravery to put the Key
    In my ignition.

    That’s when I found it.
    No way around it.

    I have a panacea to turn the greatest man into a coward.
    It acts as kleptomaniac repellant
    From the mouth of a jaded savant.
    Save this, the miraculous genesis that is doomed to revelations,
    A disembodied fist slams the bud of celebration to abyss but
    My panacea is better than this.

    If I could make it into medicine
    I’d put it in words.
    It doesn’t work when I obey the revolution.
    They think I speak a hoax if it’s not tangible,
    If I’m not tangible,
    If life’s not tangible, it must be hella easy to break,
    And now I’m living that hypothesis, I’m living my fate.
    If this is all I had to go on
    Only this to get by,
    I hope you’d miss me when I die.

    But my panacea keeps me alive.
    And I’d rather have death than the crime
    Of evolution.




    Submitted on 2006-08-28 09:55:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Wow, this was well...very creative...
    really
    "They think I speak a hoax if it’s not tangible,
    If I’m not tangible,"
    for some strange reason I really liked that part...
    | Posted on 2006-09-04 00:00:00 | by Swanne | [ Reply to This ]



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