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    dots Submission Name: Reflectiondots
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    Author: Valle_Siddious
    ASL Info:    24/Male/Dystopia
    Elite Ratio:    2.51 - 93/94/41
    Words: 169
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 1190
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 542



    Description:
       This is the first poem i wrote.
    It was written like, four years ago.
    But since then i've revised it and
    fixed it up here and there.
    Don't bash it too bad.


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    dotsReflectiondots
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    When i look into the mirror of time,
    I do not see my complexion.
    Instead, i see the long lost dreams,
    of my lifes reflection.
    Yes, there were some challenges,
    I did meet on my way.
    I bet if stretched out full in lenght,
    It would touch the Milky Way.
    But time means me nothing.
    And neither do the days.
    Fore' all that matters in the end,
    Is how you lived your stay.




    Submitted on 2006-08-28 12:36:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      No this is actully really good it says a lot for such a short poem. I like it!

    ~*Jackie*~
    | Posted on 2006-08-28 00:00:00 | by jackz | [ Reply to This ]


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