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    dots Submission Name: I Need You Moredots
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    Author: Toxic Rose
    Elite Ratio:    5.82 - 159/220/97
    Words: 208
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Religious
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    Description:
       I love you, God.


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    dotsI Need You Moredots
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    Love eternal swallowing me in
    You forgave me, forgot all that Iíve been
    Just tell me what there is for me to do
    Show me so I can live to please you

    More than water, more than rain
    You cleanse me, make me pure
    More than anything all the world could bring
    I need you more
    More than life

    Joy surrendered, always near my heart
    I will trust you for all that you are
    My pride falls down at your feet as I sing
    I know the power of the love you bring

    More than water, more than rain
    You cleanse me, make me pure
    More than anything all the world could bring
    I need you more
    More than life

    How can I repay you for what youíve given to me?
    All I can do is praise you because I know that you see
    That every breath that I take is born to sing
    Of your glory, your power, your honor, your joy

    More than water, more than rain
    You cleanse me, make me pure
    More than anything all the world could bring
    I need you more
    More than life

    More than anything all the world could bring
    I need you more.




    Submitted on 2006-08-28 12:59:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Hi, *waves*

    I'm listening to Hillsong United- There is Nothing Like and I came across your song and I just wana say its beautiful! I love it, LOVE IT! If anyone gives you slack about it, ignore them.

    *twirls in a circle singing, There is nothing like Your love, Your Love...*

    Yay! *dani
    | Posted on 2006-08-28 00:00:00 | by firefoxvixen | [ Reply to This ]


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