Description: This is old. I never posted it before because when I showed it to the person it was written about, I got bad reviews. It stopped me from writing for a long time.
Why Do I Love You -------------------------------------------
I love the color of your hair
How soft and smooth it is
I love how the sun shines on it
Forming a glow around your head.
I love the color of your eyes
How their both brown and green
Their so deep and mysterious
The focus of my every dream.
I love the way you smile
How alive it makes you appear
When you're smiling, so am I
I'd never shed a tear.
I love the way your jacket
Hangs so perfect off your shoulders
And how your t-shirt crinkles
So I can't read what it says.
I love the way you rest your hands
Half in the pockets of your jeans
They're always dirty, torn, and faded
I've yet to see them looking clean.
I love the confidence you stand with
How it draws everyone into you
Your shoulders straight, yet slouched
Making the confidence seem true.
I love the way you talk
How confused your accent sounds
I could listen for hours, never bore
Never figiting or moving around.
I love the way you sing
There's such a passion in your tone
You can hit almost every note
And sound amazing doing so.
I love the things you say to me
How you make me feel so alive
Even with a simple "hello"
I feel like I'd melt inside.
So ask "why do you love me?"
I have enough reasons to
The simplest explaination I can give:
I love everything about you.
I can only hope that I can write a poem like this when I do fall in love. Don't get me wrong,
I love my girlfriend, but I'm not in love with her. Their is a big diffrence for me. and one day I hope to put into words somehow like you have.
i've read this before... he showed me it. i'm glad you felt that way about someone and had the chance to feel that strongly for someone. i like this peice, its really sweet. SAM
Submission Name: Why Do I Love You
