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    dots Submission Name: This Is Heaven, Or Just Prior to Anything Elsedots
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    Author: FarawayFeelings
    ASL Info:    16/F/Mia
    Elite Ratio:    0.93 - 159/74/72
    Words: 157
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       About the first people and maybe the invention of the smile..it has a bit of a metaphorical moral if you can catch it.;)

    -Anya


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    dotsThis Is Heaven, Or Just Prior to Anything Elsedots
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    Among the newly formed rock,
    and aside the thick and mysterious mist,
    we saw the skies,
    deep, dark, and spotted with twinkling lights,
    We also saw eachother. (Alot actually, being the first people to walk this tender planet.)

    Sitting across from one another one day,
    my hands formed a smile of his lips,
    not knowing it,
    like a child molding clay for the first time,
    and making some unconcious masterpiece.

    And his hands rose to my face,
    as the tips of his finger spread my mouth,
    pushing up the corners and then smoothing his fingers back across.

    Space and time, to us, were limitless.
    For all we knew this rock that cradled us went on forever, just like the sky above,
    that we couldn't the end of.

    After that day, we did that all the time,
    at everything and everywhere, last week they came together, and that's as far as we've gotten.




    Submitted on 2006-08-29 14:33:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like it. I the way that you can feel the emotions in it. It is a though I'm right their with you... Good write
    | Posted on 2007-05-04 00:00:00 | by Katlord | [ Reply to This ]


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