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    dots Submission Name: The Winddots
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    Author: Skinwalker
    Elite Ratio:    2.62 - 36/57/28
    Words: 80
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    Description:
       Another try at a love poem. I wrote this one of the top of my mind.


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    dotsThe Winddots
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    Wind flowed across the lands
    blowing through the woods
    reaching the mountain tops
    whispering to me.

    I asked it what it was saying
    where it wanted me to go
    what it wanted me to do
    it replied, "Come to me"

    The wind tugged at me
    brought me to you
    your beauty astounding
    the wind pulled us close.

    We hugged we kissed
    we shared our care
    we picked a flower
    and in love blew it in the wind




    Submitted on 2004-05-20 21:19:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I felt like this looking at the mountains in the distance - such a great feeling of love & contentedness
    I really enjoyed this - like a soft breeze
    What a great path we are on
    Thanks!
    Love,Peace,Joy&Smilez 2 share
    tif
    | Posted on 2006-01-12 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      I really liked this....Like how you said the wind tugged at me, brought me to you....Nicely written...enjoyed it a lot....Thank You for sharing it with us.... Desi.
    | Posted on 2004-05-20 00:00:00 | by Desi | [ Reply to This ]
      I loved the imagery! I thought it flowed well and had a wonderful meaning behind it. Great job. I enjoyed reading it and look forward to more.
    | Posted on 2004-05-20 00:00:00 | by darkened_soul | [ Reply to This ]


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