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    dots Submission Name: The Cloud and love and winddots

    Author: bobbydlt1989
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       is about the wind and cloud and love and mouth

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    dotsThe Cloud and love and winddots

    I see a cloud
    When I see a cloud
    I feel Like I was flying in the air
    I feel the breeze flowing though my hair

    I see a cloud
    when I see a cloud
    I see a sun is hidden by a cloud
    I feel like I was looking for something

    I feel the wind
    when I feel the wind
    I feel like I was floting in the air
    like superman

    your eye make my heart
    to heat up of love
    your hair is like a butterfly flying away in the air
    your mouth make me smile.

    Submitted on 2006-08-29 16:16:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      That is one of the most ridiculous titles for a poem I have ever seen in my life.Are you a native speaker of English? If not I apologise.
    | Posted on 2006-08-31 00:00:00 | by Asakura Cowboy | [ Reply to This ]

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