Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: ~DON'T FOLLOW ME~dots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: bigrig0625
    ASL Info:    34 M Tx
    Elite Ratio:    2.96 - 40/73/19
    Words: 106
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 1043
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 810



    Description:
       I stay so confused in my own mind that it might not be a good idea to follow me!


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dots~DON'T FOLLOW ME~dots
    -------------------------------------------


    Don't follow me
    I'm already lost
    Your world will change
    You'll bare the cost

    Don't follow me
    I can't find my way
    How will I lead you?
    What can I say?

    Don't follow me
    I'm upside down
    My thoughts are not clear
    My world is profound

    Don't follow me
    My life is not pure
    So full of pain
    I can't find a cure

    Don't follow me
    I set no example
    I give nothing back
    My friendship unample

    Don't follow me
    I'm very unstable
    I can't lead you home
    I'm very unable


    ~bigrig0625~










    Submitted on 2006-08-29 23:07:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      this poem is really good. I can relate to it. Because when people look up to u and they want guidenice from u and its like look dont follow me right now im screwed up.

    yeahh..

    peace
    Aylin
    | Posted on 2007-04-23 00:00:00 | by WD-40 | [ Reply to This ]
      wow i liked it, it was sayying that your not stable right now and no one should follow you. i can really relate to it.

    Fana
    | Posted on 2006-08-30 00:00:00 | by BusterLILblock | [ Reply to This ]
      I can relate to what you are saying here, I feel like I am lost and turned around alot of the time, so God forbid anyone should follow me, it might be a trip straight to hell :) Dean
    | Posted on 2006-08-30 00:00:00 | by Survivor_Dean | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    116318

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.


    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry