it is a good poem witha diffrent style, every second line of each paragraph is informative and related to first line in a very unique and maybe this is where your poem is different from others. this poem is two way poem, it is both above and below, i mean deep. as i read every physical thing about death was clear but i can understand this poem is also about the emotional death.
I touched you one last time but there wasn’t that warmth there was just me falling
when a relationship dies, some emotions become very cold same as when someone dies the body becomes cold. somehow emtional death is more painful than physical death.
i think the way you expained death is great you covered all the aspects. i liked those lines about memories they touched my heart, it felt really amazing.