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Emotional Break

Author: Poetic Ways
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Emotional Break

Is my time up, not much left to live for,
Been thru many...seeking my last door,
Not a physical suicide this is only mental,
Due to thoughts and feelings with impacts detrimental,
I'm sick of the pain I'm sick of the fight,
I'm sick of life...A path with no light,
I'm not depressed just emotionally drained,
And I'm sick of my sunshine destroyed by rain,
I seek no help so alone I deal...alone I cry,
Alone I am at heart so it's alone I try,
This is not a cry for help, or maybe it is,
Emotionless I'll become for my decision is this,
I will not hurt...I will not feel...I will no longer care,
Because if emotions aren't present then niether will be my tears!

Submitted on 2006-08-30 01:42:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I felt this .......:'( ....Its hard to cope with the emotions that come with the territory of human life and it sounds like you have gone through a lot of trials and have loved and trusted and get hurt or betrayed along the way...Keep the love and stay strong to your faith
I can relate to what you have wrote here though and i have felt the same on many an occasion....keep it real...lotsa luv...God bless ...nadinexx
I really like ur work it has a rap tang to it...i like it a lot
| Posted on 2006-08-31 00:00:00 | by lostspirit | [ Reply to This ]
  wow.. i love this poem this is so amazing you are a really amazing writter!

<3 Brittaney-Mae
| Posted on 2006-09-03 00:00:00 | by justkillme08 | [ Reply to This ]

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