Heart On Deadline
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basically about waiting around for this one person who's taking their time to come back, but in the end, you don't want them anymore cause you've waited too long and they missed their chance.
Heart On Deadline
verse 1: seconds tick by as minutes fade away i sit and patiently wait for and end to come or a new beginning whichever comes first will relieve my soul cause it's hard to hold on when i'm ready to let go chorus: i've been holding on, for so long and if you won't take my hand then i'll choose to move on my heart is running out of patience so it's your turn to decide and you're running out of time cause my heart is on a deadline verse 2: days pass by and weekends disappear i swear i won't cry if i don't hear from you oh you have your own life and i have mine but i want you here it's so hard to hold on cause i'm ready to let go chorus verse 3: months creep past and i am losing count of all the times i've cried i've sat here to wait but it's getting too late and i can't take it i want you with me but it's hard to hold on and i'm ready to move on chorus coda: i've been holding on for too long and if you won't take my hand i'll be moving on you're running out of time you're running out of time cause my heart is on a deadline |
Submitted on 2006-08-30 10:00:59 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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| Hey, i think this is the first time i am reading your lyrics. I never really had the experience in waiting for someone to come around and grab my hand to tell me they want me but i really tried to understand what you were saying and i think i got the general message as to what you were saying. It's pretty cool to actually feel something you never felt before and being able to understand the other's point of view. So thanks for sharing this piece. I don't really think a heart is on a deadline honestly because once it begins beating, it never really stops unless you run out of patience. It's all about what you are willing to do for this love except for waiting. Waiting doesn't really help too much. As my b/f says "I'm not psychic, if you want something, tell me, i can't get into your head". So instead of waiting, go for it or at least indicate some signs. Waiting is a waste of time unless you've done all you could and patience is what you need at that time. My only suggestions is to use capital letter for "I", it kinda looks bad in english language. I don't really know how lyrics go these days but i am sure they still use capital "I". Anyhow, nicely done. Take care.... ~Irina | Posted on 2006-09-04 00:00:00 | by charmedidentity | [ Reply to This ] | I really like this one Kriss. One of your best in a while girl. I really like the idea behind it. I love the last bit of the chorus, | " so it's your turn to decide and you're running out of time cause my heart is on a deadline" The whole chorads is awsome though. Great piece Kriss. Keep on writing. Sarah | Posted on 2006-08-31 00:00:00 | by S.A.M. | [ Reply to This ] | |
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