Description: Just some thoughts of mine on how love makes us become a different person and how we tend to mold ourselves to our lovers opinion. Can that be considered love or stupidity?
CREATE ME -------------------------------------------
Create me in your mind
Who you think I should be
For that's what you want
You haven't asked me
Create all my thoughts
Make up my mind
Give my opinion
You do all the time
Create my suggestions
What you think I should say
Tell it to others
You do everyday
Create all my stories
Things I have done
Fill them with lies
I hope you have fun
Create my appearance
Don't have any doubt
I'll be what you want
Each time we go out
Create me for you
So you can be sure
That my life is yours
But mine to endure
Create me in your mind Who you think I should be For that's what you want [But] You haven't asked me
The above is the only suggestion I have. Overall very good. I loved it. I think that love is like that though. You get molded either by your own thoughts of how they want you, or by them personally. I think in a way, yes, that can be considered stupidity, cuz in the end they 'love you for who you are'. As always, good work. ~Caotic~
i liked the idea behind this and the way u put it to paper or computer. that's beside the point. i really enjoyed this and it reminded me of this song by Linkin Park called "Lying From You". it's about the same thing as ur poem
i liked the idea behind this too. having someone create your life and no matter what you have to live with what it is. hate the fact that it happens. love the way you told the story.
Submission Name: CREATE ME
