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Protect me


Author: LocketzVC
ASL Info:    18/F/pa
Elite Ratio:    2.18 - 12 /42 /18
Words: 43
Class/Type: Misc /Misc
Total Views: 832
Average Vote:    4.0000
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Description:


Some feelings I have at the moment, just letting them out in words


Protect me



Protect me
From all my fears

Protect me
Through all the years

Love me
Even through the tears

Love me
Without restraint

Hold onto me
Through the happy and the sad

Forget me not
Even without me there




Submitted on 2006-09-01 10:52:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  The short ones are the great ones sometimes. I liked it! Thanks for sharring!!!
Kelley Frost
| Posted on 2006-10-04 00:00:00 | by whendt | [ Reply to This ]
  The short ones are the great ones sometimes. I liked it! Thanks for sharring!!!
Kelley Frost
| Posted on 2006-10-04 00:00:00 | by whendt | [ Reply to This ]
  The short ones are the great ones sometimes. I liked it! Thanks for sharring!!!
Kelley Frost
| Posted on 2006-10-04 00:00:00 | by whendt | [ Reply to This ]
  The short ones are the great ones sometimes. I liked it! Thanks for sharring!!!
Kelley Frost
| Posted on 2006-10-04 00:00:00 | by whendt | [ Reply to This ]
  beautiful.. and heart-felt I know because I am married, and want my own husband to do all you say for me. Well written, keep it up! shalini bridges
| Posted on 2006-09-01 00:00:00 | by sbridges | [ Reply to This ]


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