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Letter to Andrew


Author: ChrystalR
ASL Info:    23/Female/Norway
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Words: 281
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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A poem in honor for Thouched by Angel character, Andrew the Angel of death.


Letter to Andrew



“Hi there.
I know you don’t know me.
Have never seen my face.
But, I love you.”

The rain cried
A tear for every part

“I have seen you around.
Gazed into the dream.

You were there,
When grandma died.
Only some weeks later
You held my friends hand
After the accident
She told me.”

The moon cried
Two tears for every part

“Did you not think
That I could see you?
A man of heaven
Walking in shadows.
Only for me to see.
And them.

The dead.

God, you looked nice
In that white suit.
And those brown eyes
That has kept me warm
Ever since the first time
I saw your face.

A look of heaven.”

The stars cried
Three tears for every part
.
“I did see.
An angel without wings.
They asked me where I had been.
My answer was always; at the hospital.
You came for them. The dead.
Liked you were there for grandma.
And for Muriel, my friend.
Where did you bring them,
To heaven?”

God cried
Four tears for every part

“I know you don’t know me.
Have never seen my face
But now I stand
In your path.

You will see me
This time”

She cried
Five tears for every part
And he came






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  aww this was so beautiful! it was so touching and sweet. i have seen the show once or twice, and so i'm not real framiliar with the characters. althought this character seems so right for your letter.

"“Did you not think
That I could see you?
A man of heaven
Walking in shadows.
Only for me to see.
And them.

The dead."

i dont know why, but this stanza reminded me so much of my grandfather who past away. i was close to him and i feel as though he is always near. this really made me feel close to him.

"“I did see.
An angel without wings.
They asked me where I had been.
My answer was always; at the hospital.
You came for them. The dead. "

these also were a few lines that stuck out to me. they are just very sobering and honest.

my favorfite part of all though was the end:
"She cried
Five tears for every part
And he came "

you did a wonderful job with this write, keep it up!
Di
| Posted on 2006-09-03 00:00:00 | by Diarygrl | [ Reply to This ]
  admitibally i don't like touched by an angel. I do however Like the angel of death; he keeps it real. this is actaully very well comprised. and has a tranquil sentiment to it. I'm really not one for love peoms; but this one kept my interest(that's saying something!). However, one thing(though it doesn't seem quite necessary for this piece) is a lack of colour. Well take care, bye now
| Posted on 2006-09-04 00:00:00 | by dismentled | [ Reply to This ]


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