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    dots Submission Name: Love's Offeringdots

    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 60
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       "There is no penalty to virtue; no penalty to wisdom; they are prooper additions of being." Emerson

    So I'm getting my entreprenurial stroll on and trying to get a social-service, spiritual project going and I am thankful for the strength from many directions...this site, as I've said more than 1x, rocks out the prophetic, beautiful and divine...thank u!

    Love, Peace, Joy!!!

    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsLove's Offeringdots

    Thank U Lord
    4 allowing
    Your Love

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      I like this. I would be interested in knowing what poets, if any, influence your writing. As I mentioned last time, I'm not familiar with any who use numberals and symbols in their work. As for me, I'm all over the place, Poe, Frost, Sandburg (go figure!) and even Ferlinghetti.
    | Posted on 2004-05-21 00:00:00 | by Sandburg | [ Reply to This ]
      I really like this alot. Don't be mad, but I can hear techno music, or something kinda trippy in the background with these lines being repeated. Not that this piece needs anything, because it says alot to me, and I think it thought and sould provoking. That was just a cool idea that popped in my head.
    Very nice write.
    | Posted on 2004-05-21 00:00:00 | by nicelyJ | [ Reply to This ]

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