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    dots Submission Name: Love's Offeringdots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 60
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 913
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 205



    Description:
       "There is no penalty to virtue; no penalty to wisdom; they are prooper additions of being." Emerson



    So I'm getting my entreprenurial stroll on and trying to get a social-service, spiritual project going and I am thankful for the strength from many directions...this site, as I've said more than 1x, rocks out the prophetic, beautiful and divine...thank u!

    Love, Peace, Joy!!!


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    dotsLove's Offeringdots
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    Thank U Lord
    4 allowing
    Your Love
    2
    Shine
    illuminate
    Divine
    Life
    Sign
    Master
    DeSign




    Submitted on 2004-05-21 10:32:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I like this. I would be interested in knowing what poets, if any, influence your writing. As I mentioned last time, I'm not familiar with any who use numberals and symbols in their work. As for me, I'm all over the place, Poe, Frost, Sandburg (go figure!) and even Ferlinghetti.
    | Posted on 2004-05-21 00:00:00 | by Sandburg | [ Reply to This ]
      I really like this alot. Don't be mad, but I can hear techno music, or something kinda trippy in the background with these lines being repeated. Not that this piece needs anything, because it says alot to me, and I think it thought and sould provoking. That was just a cool idea that popped in my head.
    Very nice write.
    | Posted on 2004-05-21 00:00:00 | by nicelyJ | [ Reply to This ]


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