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    dots Submission Name: Fliesdots
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    Author: WriterX
    ASL Info:    18/Male/Poland
    Elite Ratio:    3.59 - 68/125/82
    Words: 124
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 119
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    Description:
       One week of these darling and you really want to start WWIII.


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    dotsFliesdots
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    Such pesky little things
    Completely black and fury
    With two wings
    Which make my head explode.

    I scare them away
    With my books and words
    But like little suicide bombs
    They return, hungry for more.

    My eyes loose their focus
    When two or more appear,
    A whole squadron
    Of brave little pilots.

    But I lost my patience
    On their previous Blitz,
    I take my aerosol gun
    And shoot them down without remorse.

    Later I watch,
    How their little wrecks
    Fall and crash on the solid floor
    With no survivors to be counted.

    But as soon as I sit down
    And think this war has ended
    The noise of their new engines
    Hits my brain like a spike.





    Submitted on 2006-09-03 03:59:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Hahaha! Wonderful! I like it! What a creative way to write about.....flies. Seriously, I will never see a fly the same. Pesky little bugs... I spent most of my summer working in a building that had a fly problem, it drove me CRAZY!

    Anyway, great poem...it made me laugh. There's plenty of that other depressing poetry around, this is a great change. Keep it up!

    ~Doh
    | Posted on 2006-09-03 00:00:00 | by rememberplaydoh | [ Reply to This ]



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