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    dots Submission Name: The Catdots
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    Author: WriterX
    ASL Info:    18/Male/Poland
    Elite Ratio:    3.59 - 68/125/82
    Words: 90
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 94
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 576



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       One week of vacation... I have to really work on my titles, they all seem a bit too simple.


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    dotsThe Catdots
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    It looked at me
    It's eyes wide open.
    So innocent
    Like a newborn baby.

    I took it
    In my arms,
    Held tightly
    Close to my heart.

    A silent purr
    Came to my ears,
    It was as pleasant
    As the morning sun.

    Such a beautiful creature,
    Which was not mine,
    I would give a truck of gold
    To make it stay with me.

    But when the time has come,
    And the sun went down,
    I had to leave it there,
    In the safety of its couch.




    Submitted on 2006-09-03 04:05:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I Love Cats
    They are truly the only thing on this World that gives Unconditional Love
    You captured the Love a cat gives to its owner very well with this
    Great Job
    God Bless
    Ron

    By the way my Family is from your neighbor Country Lithuania

    Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
    Thank You
    Ron
    | Posted on 2006-09-19 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      Hehe, a title can be simple. An intrigueing title in my opinion is just a net for catching some of the more shallow readers =O.

    your whole poem led me into the thought of finding a cat out on the street, falling in love, and having your heart broken by reality (an experience I have been through). On the last line you topple things over and it turns out to be your own cat. Or maybe someone elses cat? In any case I'm not quite clear on the percise meaning, but the poem made me smile, it reads really innocent and pure no matter how I interpret it. Good on you man, thanks for posting it!

    -Yony
    | Posted on 2006-09-03 00:00:00 | by -YonY- | [ Reply to This ]



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