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    dots Submission Name: Writing in ecstasydots

    Author: Jingles
    ASL Info:    19.m.canada
    Elite Ratio:    2.08 - 18/60/36
    Words: 182
    Class/Type: Misc/Serious
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    dotsWriting in ecstasydots

    Every word that falls from my lips, falls on deaf ears and I suffocate
    Now righteousness cast aside, thrown to the ground
    I close my eyes and I see you there
    But my eyes decieve me, every other sense says I'm alone
    Now waking hours melt to sleepless nights and all fear has left me
    If I could learn from my past,I'd posess the strenght to walk away
    Let you're sweet taste fall from my lips
    But it resonates
    And now I hold this so dear,to let it fade would tear me apart
    If I now left this all behind,simply turned and walked away
    Would the dawns light fall upon my face to end this tragedy?
    Still deep in the long black behind the shimmering blue
    I swear that I've seen the last soul that I care to
    So this is passion and it crawls upon my skin
    And it sinks into my bones and I wam whole again
    And I feel it filling me and pray it will never end
    Now it burns through my veins
    And I'm writing in ecstasy

    Submitted on 2006-09-03 05:07:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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