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    Author: azure_warrior
    ASL Info:    42 /m/ in my mind.
    Elite Ratio:    5.43 - 44/43/32
    Words: 31
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 696
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 182



    Description:
       This is just a blurb, a splash of paint on a canvas. It was a reply to a poem where they asked for nonsensical remarks. I liked it.


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    from the monster of sane expectations, i rebel
    to cups, like in ancient rumi poetry
    in this blank room with quite more occurring
    than i can ever capture in ink.




    Submitted on 2006-09-03 20:37:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      haha! makes me want to dance. i think ill memorize it just to scare everyone. yes ill recite it loudly in the mall.

    keep on the keeping on
    | Posted on 2006-09-03 00:00:00 | by Saphire Twiligh | [ Reply to This ]


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