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    dots Submission Name: who is the real me?! <3dots
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    Author: justkillme08
    ASL Info:    18/F/MA
    Elite Ratio:    1.63 - 97/170/124
    Words: 155
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 596
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 912



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    dotswho is the real me?! <3dots
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    searching for myself
    is this place
    with familar faces
    they all know who they are
    but i feel like an outsider
    im usually in the spot light
    the one everyone looks to
    but now i feel so helpless
    im so confusd on what to do
    i used to know
    where i belonged
    then one day
    everything just went wrong
    i was left broken hearted for the millionth time
    told myself i had to change something
    because this life im living just aint right
    at times i get lost in such a deep thought
    i find myself sick
    and want to throw up
    my past hurts to even think about it
    the bad memories hurt
    but the good memories hurt the most
    i just wish i knew who i was
    i just wish i knew who i am
    so then i wouldnt have to right
    these stupid poem
    i confine myself in




    Submitted on 2006-09-03 20:46:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I dont think any1 really knows 'who' they are. and we have come to believe all that matters is who other ppl want us to be. we try to be something for everyone, so, in effect, we never find 'who' we really are. does that make sense? i don't think it does, but neva mind. i'm still looking for the real me too.
    nice work, i think you have just wrote how everyone feels. so, i hope you don't feel like an outsider anymore.
    whirl**
    | Posted on 2006-09-04 00:00:00 | by whirl | [ Reply to This ]
      who knows....
    i dont even know who i am.. everyone searches it... some people tries to find it with their own ways.. some people can t decide to talk about it.. they can t they just bury it inside themself... the way you did is one of the best ways... and to think about it.. it was just cool.. just the word "stupid" didn t suit the poem.. this was all.. go on... good luck
    | Posted on 2006-09-04 00:00:00 | by analyst | [ Reply to This ]


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