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    dots Submission Name: Curiosity Kills Heroesdots
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    Author: Swanne
    Elite Ratio:    4.31 - 258/206/43
    Words: 77
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsCuriosity Kills Heroesdots
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    At the death of midnight
    You watch me
    Always, with a quiver
    I ask you why
    You say that I know

    Things hide behind my teeth
    To each other
    We lie in fevers
    To find our tame voice

    Over and over again
    A colored picture of us
    Pressing topless
    Exists only in dreams

    In the birth of daylight
    You follow me
    Never do I ask you why
    We both don’t want to know




    Submitted on 2006-09-04 01:38:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      this has a very interesting subject but i think it doesn't flow properly... i dunno why, it might just be me...

    Sad Lion
    | Posted on 2006-09-04 00:00:00 | by Sad Lion | [ Reply to This ]
      What you've got here is great, but I get the distinct impression there's a lot more here to write about. This feels unfinished to me. Maybe you should see where continuing it takes you. Just a thought...

    Peace, love and all that other junk,

    Joe

    PS. Nice hat...
    | Posted on 2006-09-07 00:00:00 | by joeyalphabet | [ Reply to This ]



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