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    Author: Mr_Eff
    Elite Ratio:    3.29 - 61/62/39
    Words: 276
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
    Total Views: 111
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1706



    Description:
       I have no idea where this came from. I started with the first two lines. The rest flowed. It took the form of a song, as certain parts came into my head, they had a musical cadence joining them. I guess it's a sort of pep talk. Sort of.


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    Here we are again. Don't you find this getting old?
    Are you a fucking idiot? Don't you get sick of being told?
    About your fakes, and your facades. Did you calculate the odds?
    Of a savior finding favor, when you desicrate all gods?

    It's time to stop riding the fence, knuckle up, and start living
    The end will come faster, than you can recapture the begining

    You've got to get on track, and don't look back
    You're timing and planing need to be exact
    Get on track, you need to think, then act
    Don't let the sweet bliss of ignorance distract

    You must be out your mind, or all 5 senses must be blind
    The web that you're entangled in, is one of your design.

    You sad, silly little fool!

    You say you're so tired of always feeling dis-connected
    Try and exercise those lonely ghosts that you've collected
    No one will do it for you, if they do it's not the same
    You need to leave this world in peace, or get into this hustled game

    If you wait for it to happen, I can promise it will pass you
    The consequences of your actions, and your sins will far out last you

    You've got to get on track, and make contact
    With the strength to fill the spots your will lacks
    Get on track, don't just react
    You've got to give action, before you can get some slack

    You must be fucking crazy, you never cease to amaze me
    The fact you never take the blame, constantly slays me

    You goddamned silly fool!





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