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    dots Submission Name: Love,lust and betryaldots
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    Author: every48seconds
    ASL Info:    25/M/toronto
    Elite Ratio:    3.32 - 123/163/129
    Words: 149
    Class/Type: Misc/
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    Love,lust and betrayal go hand in hand
    Love which is the feeling between two people
    that feeling of untainted happiness,complete and udder safety while there with you
    But love has it's down sides
    It could be fake,just lust covering it up but we as humans can't take that as an answer so we force ourselves to believe it's love
    And of course most love situations end in betrayal of that significant other,them leaving you for a friend,younger or older family member, or just another person in there life.
    Of course lust and betrayal both lead to love
    What I'm trying to say is that the all go together perfectly,it scares me that it does
    My question today is this"What really is love,lust and betrayal?","Why do they go together so much?" and "Is there anyway of loving someone without getting lust or betrayal in the way and vice versa"?




    Submitted on 2006-09-04 11:59:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is an interesting write. Definetly gets you thinking as you read through it, well it did me. Just how when you read a line and it kept going, kept making sense. Love, lust, and betrayal are the same, because one way or another they just a viscious cycle if you ask me. Once you get one of them eventually down the road youll run into the next one. Thats how it usually works for me in some sad way.
    Anyways, again, good write. Makes a good thought for pondering.
    | Posted on 2009-03-04 00:00:00 | by dreamer37517 | [ Reply to This ]
      I think we tend to hear of more stories that end in tragedy or betrayal because they're intense and dramatic, making them more exciting and interesting stories to tell.

    Lots of breakups end with the two people remaining friends ... lots of my breakups at least. I am assuming it's more common then is spewed from the media.
    | Posted on 2007-04-25 00:00:00 | by ssssss | [ Reply to This ]
      This was thought provoking. It was also an enjoyable read. I would have to agree with the writting in a sceular view, that love, lust and betrail are all to often strung together.

    But from a spiritual view, love exists and when true love is found there is no room for untrue lust or betrail.

    Concider reading Airstoles writtings on friendship, you might enjoy it.
    -Kishkuman
    | Posted on 2006-09-04 00:00:00 | by Kishkuman | [ Reply to This ]
      you spelled betrayal wrong...it was ok, but not the best....good though
    there is no love without some betrayal, even if it is only to yourself -- some can be totally pure, but it usually doesnt work without at least a little lust...
    lust can be totally disconnected, but too much and you think its love, or betray another for that lust...
    as for betrayal, to want to betray someone, dont you have to hate them a little bit, and hate is so very close to love...and can be caused by lust....

    i hope that isnt too wordy...

    xoxo
    | Posted on 2006-09-08 00:00:00 | by blu_kittin | [ Reply to This ]


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