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    dots Submission Name: Love 1 AnOtherdots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 493
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       I would like for this to be read/critiqued: I am using this initially while I'm formulating and creating my business plan, to present to churchs/organizations/friends/family....





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    May 20, 2004

    Love One Another;
    “and the firmament is showing His handiwork.” Psalm 19 partial v. 1
    Jesus walked the lands of our Father as living example of eternal family and teacher by example of Love in uplifting God through infinite divine expression. His gift to us a “proof” that God is present in All. The proof His handiwork knows no bounds, no borders, no distinctions. His words were example through Action...walk the talk and talk the walk, if you will.
    “If, therefore, in relationship with Christ there is any encouragement, if there is any persuasive appeal of love, if there is any fellowship in the Spirit, if any affections and compassion then make my joy complete by being in agreement, having the same Love, being united in spirit, having the same attitude, doing nothing out of selfishness or conceit, but with humility regarding others superior to yourselves. Neither must each be looking out only for his own interests but also for those of others.” Philippians 2 vs. 1 - 4
    I was raised in the promise of a good work ethic yet balanced with a free spirit and lessons of compassion. I am 34 years of age and have had several fruitful and promising careers; both in economy and in education. Yet, I bring no resume with me today. Those years have I served well as they have served me with lessons I have yet to realize.
    I come to you today as so many I have loved and who have helped me to see the firmament of His handiwork...in humble request of assistance. I have dedicated my Life the last 2 years to serving God and I have been humbled in awe of my fellow man, animal and environments; each a superior example of divine brotherly Love, expression and existence. No one entity surviving solely on its own yet intertwined in purpose. Today I am, like those I serve, in need of many things.
    My mission has no building but it has the most solid foundation, I have no affiliation but of Creator and Lord so my work is for no one man but all. As I travel across deserts and over mountains I carry no weapon but the sword Grace and my armor Faith.
    Attached you will find no list as the needs are basic and simple: prayers, bibles, cash, canned and pantry foods, formula, diapers, clothing, shoes, crayons, books, paper. LOVE. All items are blessed and that Love through energy is spread
    I will be returning to Puerta Punesca, Mexico on the 29th of May to a Women’s Rehab/Shelter and Children’s Home to provide assistance to these groups and to the local community. I thank you in advance for your prayers and donations!


    Respectfully,
    In His Name,

    Tiffany McAchran




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