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    dots Submission Name: Everythingdots
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    Author: little_theif
    ASL Info:    20/F/Halifax
    Elite Ratio:    3.03 - 42/58/26
    Words: 139
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 84
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 944



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       Tube tops drove me to write this. I'm entirely honestly serious. Tube tops.


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    dotsEverythingdots
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    Why do you bare
    Everything you've got
    Bare it all until there's nothing left

    Why do you give
    Everything you have
    Until you have nothing left to give

    Why do you let it all hang out
    For everyone to see
    For everyone to touch

    And when they've seen
    All there is to see
    And you're down to your skin
    When you've done it all
    They've done it all
    What's there left
    To keep them coming back for more

    When they've seen everything you are
    And everything you've done
    All the places that you've been
    And they don't want you anymore
    What is it that makes you special
    What is there left to give

    The more that you keep
    The more that you have
    The more that you can give
    Some other day




    Submitted on 2006-09-05 01:14:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      True it's the hint of something that keeps them interested. too uch tooo fast leaves you in ost instatnces ........alone. I like this and wish more peole understood you don't have to compromise yourself to be loved. nice job.
    | Posted on 2006-09-05 00:00:00 | by trynfinity | [ Reply to This ]



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