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    dots Submission Name: I'm finedots
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    Author: little_theif
    ASL Info:    20/F/Halifax
    Elite Ratio:    3.03 - 42/58/26
    Words: 118
    Class/Type: Poetry/Alone
    Total Views: 67
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 788



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    dotsI'm finedots
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    I'm fine
    Everything is fine
    I've never felt better

    Lay in bed until four pm
    Just because I can
    Just for something to do

    I guess I could go out walking
    Up these hills and own these roads
    All by myself

    I could go sit at the bar
    And hope that they don't notice
    I'm all alone

    When a tree falls
    No one's around to hear it
    Does it make a sound

    You live your life
    You're the only one to see it
    Did you really live at all

    I'm fine
    Everything is fine
    I've never felt better

    I'm fine
    That's a lie
    I wish that I felt better




    Submitted on 2006-09-05 01:15:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Quite the lil rant that you have going on in this piece. You really do sound like you need the help that you are asking for in this. Meaning, that.....

    We all go through a time that we have so many things going on in our mind that we just wish somebody would come and help take the load off.

    This was written with simplicity. You showed that these emotions you have aren't complicated...but not everybody is noticing it.

    Always keep your head up!

    This was a nice lil rant. Good job!

    Li Li
    | Posted on 2006-09-06 00:00:00 | by Munchie_1226 | [ Reply to This ]



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