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    dots Submission Name: Clanking Chains (8-31-2006)dots
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    Author: Fairy Poet
    Elite Ratio:    1.01 - 1/1/2
    Words: 96
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
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    Average Vote:    3.0000
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    Description:
       This is a retaliation against those who think they are better than the whole universe.


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    dotsClanking Chains (8-31-2006)dots
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    Chains
    Clank, clank
    Chains
    Keeping me tied down
    Spanked and rotten red now
    You keep hitting me
    You won't stop
    You want control
    You want revenge
    Do you think you're better
    then all other creatures
    Think your thoughts over asshole
    You don't know fucking shit
    About nothing
    Go fuck yourself
    If you think you're the fucking big shit disease
    Should everyone bow to you motherfucker
    You open your fat mouth
    And the only sound is clanking chains
    The chains of bullshit
    Are filling up your mind
    Clank, clank, clank
    The only sound from your stupid brain




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