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    dots Submission Name: Ritual Of Love (9-5-2006)dots
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    Author: Fairy Poet
    Elite Ratio:    1.01 - 1/1/2
    Words: 52
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       Love is a very good ritual.


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    dotsRitual Of Love (9-5-2006)dots
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    Ritual of love
    Ritual of hate
    Don't take revenge
    Against a hated foe
    Let the higher being do so
    Live your life
    With the loving kinds
    Ritual of love
    Love everyone
    Showing compassion
    Patience and truth
    No lying
    Or you might as well be dying
    kissing, hugging
    That's the ritual of loving




    Submitted on 2006-09-05 02:51:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      niiice... even tho i think dats a hard way of living.. cuz i got a short tempure but if ur really like thats really diffrent really unique... strange style tho.. nice work tho diffrent from what ive noticed.. keep it up
    | Posted on 2006-09-05 00:00:00 | by bryan88 | [ Reply to This ]


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