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    dots Submission Name: Nut Staindots
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    Author: DrewDilla
    ASL Info:    25/M/Chicago
    Elite Ratio:    2.81 - 131/196/51
    Words: 169
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 1081
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 762



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       I thout to send a mass IM on yahoo so this what I came up with dont know why but I made it.


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    dotsNut Staindots
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    Now I know I am insane, but who else can you blame. For not reaching fame. Not me, cause you a lame. Ya donít say my name. Say the name of that dame from yesterdays game. NOW.... NOW..... Tame. Your pics in a frame, and thatís what you win. After the game bet you feel like u came in Jane. Remember back when it rained, and your pants got a nut stain and your balls where in pain, because she was to plain with fat veins. Now Santa hold those dear reins. So I get my new Hanes underwear. So Iím not standing here bare. Oh now that got you to care. I think that aint fair. That my dick makes you stare cause it looks rare cause it got nice red hair, and my balls shaped like a pear. They quite a pair now the beat will blare maken your ears flare.




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      I thought that was FUC(KIN class! Pure genius! Love it! FU(KIN love it!
    | Posted on 2006-09-08 00:00:00 | by RichieHM | [ Reply to This ]


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