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    dots Submission Name: my ex girldots
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    Author: maninthemirror
    ASL Info:    17/m/arkansas
    Elite Ratio:    2.64 - 224/318/109
    Words: 78
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
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    dotsmy ex girldots
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    when we was together it was emotional bliss/
    but few things last forever, that I've come to terms with/
    I've got my lyrical strenghth back, and i"m ready to burn shit/

    do you remember when I said I was sorry, its true/
    I'm truly sorry for the many things that I did to you/
    I appreciate your blessing for me and alisha/
    you know our friendship ain't end yet, I"m still gonna need ya/





    Submitted on 2006-09-05 22:40:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      i like this one, its really good. i havent read alot with guys talkin about girls. so its kinda new. but its good i likes alot

    amber</3zakabi
    | Posted on 2006-12-18 00:00:00 | by Suicidalchild51 | [ Reply to This ]
      hey bubz, hope all is gud with you, im likin this one hun, it could become real catchy, hope u extend, will be chekin on it,
    keep em cummin
    kyrenia x
    | Posted on 2006-09-15 00:00:00 | by secret kisses | [ Reply to This ]
      I used to feel the same way about my ex boyfriend..
    but pain fades my friend...things do get better with time..
    | Posted on 2006-09-06 00:00:00 | by dark lover | [ Reply to This ]


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