I thought you were talking about your little sis at first and a wooden spoon on a plastic container--not so. Well stated to those who know you, maybe vague for those who don't.
The meter was fine in this write. The message was as elusive as the title, however. It seemed quite personal and in need of more expansion on the relationship between the writer and the band. The reader needs a sense of what the poem was saying, since it is so brief and vague.
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