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    dots Submission Name: TO MY NARCISSISTIC NEIGHBORdots

    Author: azure_warrior
    ASL Info:    42 /m/ in my mind.
    Elite Ratio:    5.43 - 44/43/32
    Words: 174
    Class/Type: Poetry/Them
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    I see you standing so tall, perfect and proud.
    You must look fantastic in an SS uniform.

    You gather in and take so greedily.
    Take my soul-you're entitled.

    There are gangs of you bruising the world.
    Make sure no one strays from your shallow mind.

    You've got friends,
    You wouldn't have if you'd been born darker.

    You are a symbol of freedom,
    To closed minds from the gutter.

    You look so convincing.
    People jump unthinking to your barbarity.

    You keep your harem very pregnant.
    You own them.

    You sold your sister into a marriage.
    You scripted.

    How wonderful and powerful you are,
    To those incapable of original thought.

    How powerful and wonderful you are.
    The devil looks like you.

    If you looked suspicious,
    Your cover would be blown.

    You're important. You're connected.
    To "respectable" scum and losers.

    You won't let me be,
    Until you've erased me.

    But you'll never be half the man I am.
    And you damn well know it!

    Submitted on 2006-09-06 18:30:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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