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    dots Submission Name: My three wordsdots
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    Author: musikismylife16
    ASL Info:    16/Female/Alaska
    Elite Ratio:    1.7 - 4/3/3
    Words: 104
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 570
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 578



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    dotsMy three wordsdots
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    You claim to not be worthy
    Of the love I feel for thee
    Though you say you feel the same love for me
    You say, still, you are not worthy.

    So I want to know, my love, my dear
    If it was those three words I did not want to
    hear

    Why I would fight so hard to have you near
    For in my heart, you stay so dear.

    So please do not think we should say Adieu
    Forgetting our love and not starting anew
    Leaving my three words unsaid to you
    My three words: I love you.




    Submitted on 2006-09-06 19:40:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Well written, and it is easy to see that this comes straight from your heart...well done.

    Frank.
    | Posted on 2008-01-08 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      This is very nice, reminds me of a few good memories. in any case makes a clear and strong message. I reallylike it. good job. Hesitation is a factor to never dwell on, just some words of advice from a user. bye (-_o) d
    | Posted on 2006-09-06 00:00:00 | by Hesitation | [ Reply to This ]


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