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    dots Submission Name: Things You Lackdots
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    Author: Lil J
    ASL Info:    21/F
    Elite Ratio:    4.09 - 37/24/23
    Words: 220
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 106
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       My friend was going through a bout of jealousy with our other friend. It's nothing incredible but their spat must've sparked something...


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    dotsThings You Lackdots
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    jealousy, the most horrific emotion one possesses
    makin even the best of friends out to be monsters
    turning people inside out, leaving behind inner messes
    instead of seeking what they want, people take what others offer

    you try so hard, you break your back
    struggling but still you seem so far behind
    when focused on things you want, the things you lack
    you forget whats important- you lose your mind

    even towards the people you consider your friends
    to their face, speak with love to whom you adore
    yet with devious eyes secretly you plot their ends
    envious, hating, spiteful, wanting more

    take to heart these written words
    that so many have passed them by
    just sit & think about the herds
    of "friends" who wait for you to die

    why spend time pining for what others own
    when you're gone, you cant take it with you
    so jealousy makes people feel so alone
    dont keep begging- just start anew

    hold on to what you've got
    it's more precious than you know
    i've never given it a second thought
    or my hatred ways would show

    next time dont be jealous of someone
    it doesnt look good on your part
    the only posession thats worth a ton
    is not gold- but instead your heart




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      two of my friends did this they were the best of friends ever thenit ended in a day over bull[censored] and their only just making that mutual peace again but they still dont talk this owns i realy liked the way you worded it :D yummm

    Rak^)
    | Posted on 2006-09-07 00:00:00 | by dark figure | [ Reply to This ]



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