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    dots Submission Name: A Scornful Owldots
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    Author: mrmundane
    ASL Info:    20/m/vancouver bc
    Elite Ratio:    2.51 - 47/88/61
    Words: 228
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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    dotsA Scornful Owldots
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    i scorn those who wake me from my nest
    of high old morality
    beating inside my chest
    should those vultures attempt to pry
    come death to them; i hope they try

    death to them i'll rake their blood
    from the feathered twigs attached by mud
    and forgive them and remember them not
    for what i had they had a lot.

    none shall see my tattered mind
    my tattered insides remain all tied
    the light of day scares me too much
    these scars remind me of the human touch

    fears are backed by distant sorrow
    anxiety and paranoia blanket every tomorrow
    the ones outside who seem so happy
    trick me at every given opportunity

    Why must I prove my worth to them
    everytime my attempts were ruined again and again
    weakness shows them you are less than they
    hypocritically they expect you to believe what they say

    so prove to me who is greater than i
    for me I am god and i am the universe to i
    the stars bear witness to my steady thoughts
    i often wonder if they are backstabbers
    like the rest of us

    and soon their light will steadily fade
    drawn dim by the smoke and the lights new roads will make
    and i'll slit my wings with noone to hear
    and fall to the sidewalk
    to disappear




    Submitted on 2006-09-07 12:29:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      omg... wow... this is amazing. i love it so much. i really do hope to read more by you soon, and i'm not just saying it to be nice. this is a great piece. you are a wonderful writer. keep up the great work. keep posting. i love it.
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    | Posted on 2006-09-07 00:00:00 | by ladiesplanet1 | [ Reply to This ]



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