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    dots Submission Name: i love you still, but go to helldots
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    Author: blu_kittin
    ASL Info:    18/F/The Emerald City
    Elite Ratio:    6.16 - 687/384/203
    Words: 33
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angry
    Total Views: 207
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 214



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    dotsi love you still, but go to helldots
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    i love you still
    and you fill
    my every thought
    i get caught
    up in your eyes
    when you tell
    those pretty lies
    my fallen angel
    but its time
    you go to hell




    Submitted on 2006-09-07 13:10:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      reminds me of my past relationship. nice work
    keep it up.
    | Posted on 2006-12-07 00:00:00 | by roots | [ Reply to This ]
      Oh yea, I love this! gonna b a fav. It's what I have to say, but u said it 4 me.
    | Posted on 2006-10-14 00:00:00 | by Lil gal | [ Reply to This ]
      I can relate to this because it is kinda what I have been going through for the last 6 years of my life, I love him but I will never get anything more than a casual thing from him and I really ought to tell him to go to hell....but I don't, heart rules my head I am afraid.
    Anyway, I thought it was cleverly written. Well done.
    Frann. x
    | Posted on 2006-10-12 00:00:00 | by Effee | [ Reply to This ]
      i like it...
    lizzie
    | Posted on 2006-09-28 00:00:00 | by angeldust | [ Reply to This ]
      oh, i meant funny in the unsusspecting way, not ha ha funny
    | Posted on 2006-09-19 00:00:00 | by dark lover | [ Reply to This ]
      Interesting poem, nice work showing you can basically love someone and hate them at the same time, Dean
    | Posted on 2006-09-08 00:00:00 | by Survivor_Dean | [ Reply to This ]
      haha angst and still a very funny ending, sorry its a very pretty poem, but i love it
    another good one
    | Posted on 2006-09-08 00:00:00 | by dark lover | [ Reply to This ]



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