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    dots Submission Name: The Best and the Lastdots
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    Author: Mythicalfrog
    Elite Ratio:    6.29 - 23/7/13
    Words: 72
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Average Vote:    4.0000
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    dotsThe Best and the Lastdots
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    Some say the best die first,
    Others say the worst die last,
    Though the best die they are never dead.
    The worst are forgotten first,
    The best are forgotten last,
    Though their memories fade they are forever remembered.
    The best are the first to sorrow,
    The worst are last,
    Though first to sorrow joy always comes sooner.
    Even though the worst have the advantages
    the best are always first.





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