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    dots Submission Name: September Smogdots
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    Author: fiery whisper
    ASL Info:    21/F/Bangladesh
    Elite Ratio:    5.13 - 51/49/33
    Words: 95
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 149
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    dotsSeptember Smogdots
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    The shadow was clear,
    The shadow was dark.
    Twigs and witches in fear
    The path was stark.

    Ditches and potholes stumble upon
    Tall tails and hooded cloaks stretching across
    Shrouded in mist, the light was gone
    In rhythm of silence, the wind felt a loss.

    Circle of life, the triumph its end
    Back to the crescent, gilded in gold.
    Ivory scarred, a heartache to mend
    In this world it waited, this world had sold.

    The moon was shining.
    Behind the fog, the moon was hiding.

    Sumaiya Rahman © 2006.




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    ||| Comments |||
      Hmmm...has a somewhat autumn tone to it and little blips and blurbs that hint to the fall season and a dark halloween night. Whooo-hoooo-haaaa-haaaaaa!!!

    I dont know if I am right, but thats just the feeling I get.

    Nice job.
    | Posted on 2006-09-12 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]



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