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    dots Submission Name: Wine Tearsdots
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    Author: Twisted
    Elite Ratio:    7.47 - 159/57/75
    Words: 348
    Class/Type: Poetry/I am dead inside
    Total Views: 144
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       She's hurting.


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    Think about it, it’s not meant to be “dark” like this and all other of my poetry seems, just read it, and you’ll understand.

    Gentle fingers traced the firm jaw as she gazes into his eyes

    They draw closer to share a breath as their hearts beat as one

    His grip on her shoulder is firm, as he strokes her delicate skin

    Her eyes are dark and burning, her heart yearning for more.

    (Damned)

    She has her back against the wall, staring lifelessly at nothing

    The smooth mane of black trenches falls across her cheek

    As she bends her head to inevitable defeat

    Her ivory skin is burning to the touch, she’s thinking of home.

    (Gone)

    The tears fall red against her pale skin, like blood

    She’s plotting revenge, sitting quietly like a porcelain doll

    Face stoic and wine tears falling from artic eyes

    Trailing down like her bleeding heart.

    (Crying)

    She holds him, trying to force him to look at her

    He closes his eyes, he reminisces as he holds her

    He can hear her heart drowning, his shin rests on her head

    Before he pushes her back and turns away.

    (Screaming)

    She watched him through those dark, burning eyes

    She’s holding the cool metal against her hot skin, and it don’t feel nice

    She’s crying, and screaming, and running and falling, and drowning and burning,

    And twin trails of wine tears follow in her wake.

    (Fighting)

    The tears fall red against her pale skin like blood

    She’s plotting her revenge, sitting quietly

    As she bends her head to the sudden defeat

    Her ivory skin is burning to the touch, she’s thinking of home,

    (Leaving)

    She watched him through those dark, burning eyes

    She’s holding the cool metal against her hot skin, and it don’t feel nice

    She’s thinking of a life left behind

    She’s gone.

    July 28,2006 11:28 p.m.





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