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    dots Submission Name: Feardots
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    Author: FailureXX
    ASL Info:    15/f/MI
    Elite Ratio:    1.91 - 7/19/10
    Words: 288
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 131
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    I believe now that it is safe to say,
    Our days of wine and roses, are finaly over.
    Id do anything and everything to make this right again.
    The tears rip down my cheeks,
    a razor at its best.
    I cannot help what i am feeling deep within,
    My heart is falling to pieces,
    Im only living in sin..
    No one can save me now, as i shift the guilt upon my shoulders.
    Everyday is a battle , just to keep myself alive.
    Everything is different, now that youve gone and left me behind.
    I dont know what to say, or feel.
    everythings a blurr.
    youve been speaking to a girl,
    who has done everything wrong,
    and yet still she manages to fool the best of you.
    shes got mascara streaming from her eyes,
    and her hair is drenched with rain,
    all she wants is to be loved instead of nothing in return.
    This is not her fault, and yet she still blames it upon herself.
    shes been trying to stop herself,
    for sometime now and going,
    but nothing seems to work, and this wrench inside her heart,
    is getting tighter by the second.
    she will not stand this solitude,
    beautiful words leaking from her mouth,
    his thoughts are lingering off her lips.
    and she cannot forget what he has done to her.
    Hes broken her heart, into a thousand pieces gone eskew.
    His poison that has got her,
    fawning over death,
    Tangled in the leaves of time, and the sacred precious days.
    Truth is something many lack.
    she walks upon the guard rails.
    ready to jump into defeat.
    "How can I manage to stay here?
    when every day is Laced with fear?"




    Submitted on 2006-09-07 17:56:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Hal to thee

    Beautiful words full of meaning and deepness.
    I know what you meen by what you wrote down, just no that you're not alone.

    The poem flows nicely...

    Keep it up

    Blessed be!
    | Posted on 2006-09-13 00:00:00 | by Icegoth | [ Reply to This ]
      this is awesome
    it flows very well
    | Posted on 2006-09-09 00:00:00 | by Evonna Findley | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow, i know were this poem is coming for.
    I liked the part,
    "Everyday is a battle, just to keep myself alive."
    Thats how it is for me.
    I have to force myself to get up everyday.
    I have to stop myself from giving up.
    Sometimes i just want to go to sleep.
    And never wake up.
    But it's like an invisible force that keeps me going.
    It doesn't keep me happy.
    It just keeps me going.
    Keeps me alive......
    And it's all.......because i once loved.


    Valle_Siddious


    P.S I love your pictures, they look
    so beautiful.
    | Posted on 2006-09-07 00:00:00 | by Valle_Siddious | [ Reply to This ]



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