Description: It's not what you think it is. My brother used to sing this to me before I went to bed when I was little. It went to a variation to the tune "Rain rain go away" I think. Just goes to show how messed up that SOB was.....
Here we sit
In a ring
Close your eyes
Now as I sing
One of us
Will someday die
While the rest
Will wonder why
As the ghosts
Come to play
Try to run
They beg to stay
Evilness has left its mark
It will take you
In the dark
Your brother is an awesome dude. It is amazing! Every little bit of it so brilliant. So full of truth too. I like that part near the end especially lot.
"As the ghosts Come to play Try to run They beg to stay Evilness has left its mark It will take you In the dark"
It is so amazing. I mean, if there is the dark and there are monsters under your bed, no point telling you that there arent any. There might as well be some so just be brave and live with it. Move on!
"Try to run, they beg to stay" - I don't know.. The whole poem is just brilliant..
Dark, just the way I like it. Intriguing even though it's short which in this case is not a fault because you said everything you had to and it was all this piece really needed to make it a very valuable artwork.
...use to sing that to you when you were little? A..lot..odd to sing to a kid. Insightful, I guess, but still odd. Well, I hope you didn't turn out odd from that song
Submission Name: Brother's Lullaby
