Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • ES Magazine
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • Video Tutorials
  • RolePlay
  • 90% off Amazon
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Paindots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: Twisted
    Elite Ratio:    7.47 - 159/57/75
    Words: 196
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Vampire
    Total Views: 154
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1274



    Description:
       Another excerpt from my story, " Una lujuria de vampiro"


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsPaindots
    -------------------------------------------





    Another cut on her upper arm to match the ones decorating her body.

    The dagger shook in her hand before falling to the hard, cold, earth with a share clang, impaling itself.

    She cried out in pain, blood falling in blotches to match the opposite pools of crystal tears.

    He licked his lips, watching, knowing it was as sweet as it smelled.

    Her crossed to her, knowing that she would try to shy away from him.

    He bent forwards, licking the cut slowly, savoring the tingle of her blood.

    Her power.

    Her wine.

    Her essence.

    " Why do you continue to cut yourself?" He asked, looking into those broken eyes.

    " Why do you continue to heal me?" She whispered back.

    He considered his next words. " I heal you, because I need you."

    She licked her cracked lips, before glancing down at her own blood and tears. "I cut myself to feel."

    He copied her movements and stared at her pain too. " Why?"

    " Because I've become numb."

    He nodded his head, before continuing his healing.




    Submitted on 2006-09-07 20:10:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||



    Full Anime Episodes Streaming Free
    5 million youtube videos all rated over 4.7 stars with 40+ ratings

    [ Copy this | Start New | Full Size ]

    Google
     

    [ Chrispian ] [ Write Forum ]
    [ Friends ] [ SNESroms ] .
    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry
    This user has been inactive for more than 5 days.