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Reckless Fire

Author: Twisted
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"Theme song" from my first book Released.

Reckless Fire

You strip me down til there's nothing left but my soul,
So many things I've never felt, never trusted anyone else.
My heart was never whole, shattered everywhere.
I kept the pain inside, I buried my emotions so deep.
Behind these walls around my heart
is the little girl I've tried to kill.
Every time that you're near, I can feel
My frozen heart beating within me.
A reckless fire burns within my heart,
Rising high and burning everything around.
A path of destruction lies in its wake,
Red, hot, and burning brilliantly,
It opens up ready to consume me.
Once upon a time, I gave in,
Now I push forward with all my strength.
I rise to the challenge of my mission,
I can see the future behind my eyes.
The fire is erupting, high and bright,
Ready to let the memories burn.

Submitted on 2006-09-07 20:19:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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