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    dots Submission Name: Reckless Firedots
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    Author: Twisted
    Elite Ratio:    7.47 - 159/57/75
    Words: 149
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
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       "Theme song" from my first book Released.


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    dotsReckless Firedots
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    You strip me down til there's nothing left but my soul,
    So many things I've never felt, never trusted anyone else.
    My heart was never whole, shattered everywhere.
    I kept the pain inside, I buried my emotions so deep.
    Behind these walls around my heart
    is the little girl I've tried to kill.
    Every time that you're near, I can feel
    My frozen heart beating within me.
    A reckless fire burns within my heart,
    Rising high and burning everything around.
    A path of destruction lies in its wake,
    Red, hot, and burning brilliantly,
    It opens up ready to consume me.
    Once upon a time, I gave in,
    Now I push forward with all my strength.
    I rise to the challenge of my mission,
    I can see the future behind my eyes.
    The fire is erupting, high and bright,
    Ready to let the memories burn.






    Submitted on 2006-09-07 20:19:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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