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    dots Submission Name: That Night I Discovered...dots
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    Author: Desser
    ASL Info:    20
    Elite Ratio:    3.83 - 89/95/44
    Words: 170
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 124
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    Bytes: 1180



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       More feelings from my brake up


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    dotsThat Night I Discovered...dots
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    Hidden
    Beneath a shell
    One I didn't see
    Until it was too late
    And I tresspassed
    Knocking down the door
    Cutting through the curtains
    Breaking glass
    Using the shards
    I threatened you
    Cutting out your words
    And pasting them together
    Forming my own conclusions
    Because your effortless
    And you didn't try
    You never tried
    So I held my own judgement
    In the court of your space
    And I swung my fist of questions
    Until I heard enough
    But it will never be enough
    You lied to me
    You kept it all away
    And now as a result
    The void has surfaced
    And I want the answers
    To fill it
    To give me space
    Because it alone
    Weighs me down
    And I can't move on
    With the only truth
    That I carry
    Burdened
    Your love for me
    Was written
    All over your face
    And still is
    And always will be
    Because of your promise
    And I'll keep it
    For the both of us
    Until
    The truth be told
    By your lips.




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      I see a lot of anger and disappointment in these words. Confusion and questions pour from this. I could really feel your pain here, you did an amazing job of relaying that to the reader.

    Oh, and if you need a band-aid...I think I've got a few that could help keep that heart from breaking any more.

    *lots of hugs*

    Sorrel
    | Posted on 2007-02-21 00:00:00 | by SorrelsReality | [ Reply to This ]



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