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    dots Submission Name: Torment Blockdots
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    Author: WriterX
    ASL Info:    18/Male/Poland
    Elite Ratio:    3.59 - 68/125/82
    Words: 74
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 148
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 475



    Description:
       A play of words... what really is a Torment Block?

    Hint: Many of them were built in Poland during the "Socialist" period.


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    A gray evil structure
    With holes to let in air,
    And we, like rats,
    Are stuffed in this cage.

    With just enough food
    To let us live,
    And water so muddy
    Which we do not drink,

    But the doors are closed
    Broken down last week,
    The only way out
    Is through prayer and sin.

    We are alone,
    In this Torment Block,
    Like gray little Rats,
    locked up in a cage.




    Submitted on 2006-09-08 10:32:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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