Haha. I love it Cari. I'm going to tweak mine up a little bit later and put it up. I've just been busy with my other work and a little lazy. I thought that this was a really good assignment, didn't you? It was sure better than that stupid diagnostic test. I got a 92 % but that thing was still the most boring thing I'd ever done.
But anyhow, great job on this, and make sure to look out for mine, in like a million years.
despite what you may say,i like this.it shows that you try not to be an angry person,but rather to forgive and you want a peacefull life,rather than one thats exciting,but hurtfull to those around you.i really like this and i wish more people would read this and understand that you dont have to be this big important angry person to be happy or to make a diffrence in someones life.this is going on my favorites list without a dout.
the only thing i can see about this that you could improve is,well,try not to call your self a lamb,it implys that you cant take care of your self and that you wont stand up for your self either.or if you dont want to change that,why not make it so that insted of comparing a tiger and a lamb,its things that are total opasates.like a lamb and a wolf,or a tiger and a deer.somthing along those lines.anyway,i hope you get a good grade in english class,and that i was able to help you out.