I know what you mean. Though I don't use a swingset, I usually feel that waty driving at night. Sometimes just being alone in my room is enough. You have a few mechanical errors, "back and foth", "My eart can feel;" "and even thoughthe". You might want to work more with punctuation, but you don't have to. I really like the theme of this poem. "The silence gives thoughts time to clear And the cool air gives my wounds room to heal;" I love those two lines. Nice job, polish it a little and it'll be great.