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    dots Submission Name: Where The Crimson Endsdots
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    Author: Mekhena
    ASL Info:    13/F/Canada
    Elite Ratio:    2.37 - 3/3/5
    Words: 154
    Class/Type: Poetry/Cutting or Mutilation
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    Description:
       Heh... What to say... bitter-sweet depression continues.
    My thoughts on suicide.


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    dotsWhere The Crimson Endsdots
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    I've listened to your bickering
    On how anti-social I've become.
    And I sat there, wondering,
    If I'd ever miss my home.

    Have you ever known
    How much you've lied to me?
    I guess you wouldn't care,
    Since that's all your life is built on.

    Only to flush the pain away,
    I drew my trusty sword.
    Oh, the irony, that it was meant to protect.
    What's there to protect, but my idle soul?

    I don't need any consolence,
    I know just what to do.
    To run that beautiful steel along the vein
    And hope that death is slow.



    I want those few last minutes
    Free to think about you.
    All the stunts you pulled,
    And the things you never knew.

    I haven't spoke my thoughts,
    And I knew I never could.
    So I let my self finally go,
    And let your life go on as it should.




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